Past, Present, Future . . . Haiku

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By Truckstop Sally

I have so enjoyed reading haikus by many of my favorite hubbers over the last few weeks including Mentalist Acer, Hyphenbird, Just Ask Susan, Sueswan, always exploring, Movie Master, mckbirdbks, and more. As we end 2011 and begin 2012, please enjoy a look at the past, present, and future.

Past

History is past

We all need to learn from it

Make fewer mistakes


Present

Today is a gift

That’s why it is a present

Go and enjoy it


Future

Possibilities

Your future is what you make

Opportunities


If you have a haiku, and I have missed it . . . please let me know and feel free to link it to this hub.

Comments

Sunnie Day profile image

Sunnie Day Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Dear Sally,

This was so wonderful..I loved your Haiku's You are right so many beautiful Haiku's here on hubs...I loved the way you incorported the present past, and future...lovely words

Thank you Sally,

Happy New Year,

Sunnie

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks Sunnie! We had rainy weather today, but I heard there was snow in Texas -- near El Paso! Happy new Year to you too!

The Suburban Poet profile image

The Suburban Poet Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

Yeah these are really good. I've never tried one... but you knocked these out of the park.

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

Hi SuburbanPoet! Thanks for your note. Hoping you are looking to the Present and Future part!

Haikus are easy. The formula is:

5 syllables (for the first line); 7 syllables (for the second line); and then 5 syllables (for the last line).

Usually the subject matter is nature . . . but I don't often follow the rules. Ha!

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Sunnie Day Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Hi Sally,

It has been raining but no snow..Oh how I wish it would snow!..Happy New Year my friend,

Love Sunnie

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Such meaningful haikus Sally, and beautiful. I love the sign.

I am going to be really mean and tell you all that the weather here is beautiful, warm, sunshine and clear blue skies. I do miss a white Christmas though.

Voting up for a positive 2012

Movie Master profile image

Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Beautiful Haiku's Sally, thank you so much for mentioning mine.

Voted up and beautiful.

Merry Christmas, best wishes MM

Gypsy48 profile image

Gypsy48 Level 4 Commenter 4 months ago

Nicely done, voted up.

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Just Ask Susan Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Wonderful and inspiring haiku for the new year. Had a bit of snow here just enough.

Happy New Year.

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 4 months ago

Future,past,present and a few alternate dimensions,lol....awesome haikus Sally.;-))

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Sally, this is a great poem, actually perfect, to reflect upon as a new year approaches. May we choose better, love stronger and worship God faithfully in the future. May we learn from the past and enjoy the future. I love this very much. Thank you.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

This is a wonderful haiku..Moving forward, living in the present, forgetting past mistakes. Renewed energy for the new year. This is a great inspirational reminder...Thank you Amy...

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

SunnieDay - Thanks again! I guess our snow can be a frame of mind . . . and imagine roaring fires, warm toddies (sp?), and loves to share it with (even memories of love) . . .

Thanks Rosemay50! I love this sign too. Now, I just need to remind myself of the arrows facing forward! So glad you are having beautiful weather. I am off from school for another week and a half. . . so the cold and rain is OK. Good time to stay indoors!

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

MovieMaster - Thanks for your note! Happy New Year!

Thanks for the vote, Gypsy48! So glad you enjoyed!

JustAskSusan - Snow on Christmas . . . what a miracle!

Mentalist Acer - Gotta love those alternates. Ha!

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

Hyphenbird - Thanks for your beautiful note! Choose, love, worship, learn, enjoy . . . some of my favorite words!

always exploring - Thanks Ruby! Renewed energy . . . I'll take a gallon.

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mckbirdbks Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Your haiku holds universal truths. Well done.

I tried twice. My haiku career:

Haiku poem, This Old Heap

A Senryu: Our Bond

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writer20 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Wonderful Haiku poem, voted up and beautiful.

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Ancillotti Level 3 Commenter 4 months ago

Nice hub with a beautiful image. hugs

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

mckbirdbks - Thanks for your note. I added a haiku link to your car hub. I am not familiar with senryu. I look forward to learning something new today!

Thanks for your note and vote writer20! So glad you enjoyed!

Ancillotti - So happy to meet you. Glad our paths have crossed! Happy New Year!

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Great Haikus Sally!

Voted up and awesome.

Wishing you all the best for a Happy New Year.

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 4 months ago

Sueswan - Thanks for your note and votes! All the best to you in the New Year too!

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Minnetonka Twin Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

What a clever haiku hub and so timely for the new year. Beautiful work. Hit many buttons.

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 2 months ago

Thanks Minnetonka Twin! I am on Spring Break this week, and I look forward to catching up with all my hub friends!

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Minnetonka Twin Level 7 Commenter 2 months ago

Yay for you. Have a wonderful spring break Sally :-)

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b. Malin Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

Don't know how I missed this Wonderful set of Haiku Poems Sally, they are so Upliftings!

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 2 months ago

Thanks Minnetonka! We all need to re-charge and re-energize!

bMalin - Thanks for your note! Hope you are enjoying the New Year!

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Wayne Brown Level 8 Commenter 5 weeks ago

Sometimes that is just the way it is and all so clear...looks like you have a handle on it. Thanks for sharing. WB

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Truckstop Sally Hub Author 5 weeks ago

WB - Thanks for your note. This doesn't have to be a New Years kind-of-thing. I just interviewed for a new job today . . . so I am thinking possibilities and opportunities!! Talk to you soon! Amy

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